My 1st Real Film

Discussion in 'Locker Room' started by Dat Kid, Jan 26, 2014.

  1. So last semester I worked a film with some legit equipment and it was the 1st time I've done it and it was difficult. 10 hour film days, but i did it. There's some mistakes in there that I couldn't fix in post, but I figured I share it anyway.


     
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  2. watching now.
     
  3. Marked for dude in the giants jersey! PLAX!
     
  4. Pretty cool, feel bad for the guy in the chair.
     
  5. That was surprisingly good. you should keep this as a hobby.
     
  6. I think that's what he wants to be when he grows up
     
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  7. That's cool, I wanted that reaction. Awesome
     
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  8. I personally just don't like the shakiness. Also, some camera angles are stood in one place for a while which can seem annoying. Should probably move it around a bit.
     
  9. Reminded me of a friend I have. Always isolates himself and is kind of a dick ( i think it's like a defense mechanism), and he is his own worst enemy. Still love him though.
     
  10. About to watch - does this have any softcore porn scenes by any chance?
     
  11. Some constructive criticism, but I think you already know this from a fbook status update. The sound during a few scenes when they speak has a static in the background. That's the only thing I noticed. I thought the stand still camera was important for what was going on, you were able to lock in on the guy sitting in his chair and sort of feel his despair.
     
  12. No my friend's film does though
     
  13. Gay porn that is.
     
  14. Yeah those are issues I couldn't fix along with what Punk said about the shaky camera at points. There's even a shot where it's raining. Idk if anyone noticed
     
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  15. Really cool stuff man. Progress is what its all about.
     
  16. Are you planning anymore of these?
     
  17. Yeah I'm doing one this semester and I have one more I have to finish editing now
     
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  18. Can't wait to see it!
     
  19. I liked it. I was expecting the part where he gets pulled through and he looks back for his parallel self to be like "Imma fuck shit up pussy!"

    But yeah, I liked it, I also want to get into film. I actually write ideas down for short films & feature length films. Mostly things that would be awesome. I've wrote a movie in each genre except comedy. I hope to go to college to turn all of these into something that is existent.
     
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