Rodrigo's Show

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  1. Rodrigo.



    Current Roster:
    Last Actualisation ( According to the show's date ) :26/1/13


    Raw
    Main eventers :

    Cm Punk. (WWE Champion) (With Paul Heyman)
    John Cena.
    Ryback.

    Midcarders:

    Antonio Cesaro. (USA Champion)
    The Miz.
    Tensai.
    Brodus Clay. (With Cameron and Naomi)
    Santino Marella.
    Evan Bourne.
    Brad Maddox




    Smackdown!:
    Main eventers :

    Alberto del rio.(World Heavyweight Champion) ( With Ricardo Rodriguez)
    The Big Show.
    Randy Orton.
    Sheamus.
    Dolph Ziggler.( With A.J and Big E Langston)

    Midcarders:

    Wade barret.(IC Champion)
    Kofi Kingston.
    The great Khali.(With Natalya and hornswoggle)
    Zack Ryder.
    Yoshi Tatsu.

    Tag teams:

    Team Hell No. (Daniel Bryan and Kane) (Tag Team Champions )
    Rhodes Scholars. (Damien Sandow and Cody Rhodes)
    Rey Mysterio and Sin cara.
    Prime Time Players. (Titus and Darren)
    The Usos.
    Epico and Primo. (With Rosa)


    Groups:

    The shield (Dean Ambrose , Roman Reigns,Seth Rollins)
    3MB (Slater,McIntyre,Mahal)


    Divas:

    Kaitlyn. (Divas Champion)
    A.J Lee
    Layla.
    Alicia Fox.
    Natalya.
    Tamina Snuka.
    Aksana.
    Cameron.
    Naomi.
    Rosa.




    Part timers:

    The Undertaker.
    Triple H.
    The Rock.


    Authority Figures:

    Vince McMahon. (Chairman)
    Booker T :(GM of Smackdown)
    Vickie Guerrero:(GM of Raw)

    Announce Table :

    Raw

    Michael Cole
    Jerry "The king" Lawler

    Smackdown!:

    JBL
    Josh Matthews


    ( It will be actualised every show/PPV)
     
  2. Antonio vs Barrett Champion vs Champion, BOOK IT MAN!
     
  3. RR Preshow (Divas Royal Rumble)
    Show Spoiler

    Matthews : Here Josh Matthews and Matt Striker. Welcome everyone to the preshow of what's gonna be a fantastic event !
    Striker: We are about to start , get ready for some Divas action .Here for this match , our special guest and Divas Champion .. Kaitlyn
    Kaitlyn : Hi everyone , it is a pleasure to be here with you guys.
    Striker: The winner of this match will earn a shot to the Divas title . The rules are the same as a typical Royal Rumble match.
    Matthews: Here we go!
    (Theme music )
    Layla walks slowly to the ring , the crowd cheers her.

    Striker: Nonetheless than Layla.
    Kaitlyn: I wouldn't mind if she earns the shot.We have being friends for a lot of time and it would be fun to have a match against her.
    Matthews: And number two is....Aksana!
    Aksana runs into the ring and starts fighting with Layla.
    Matthews: I've notice that we have 8 divas and 9 entrances .. Is there any nxt diva going to make her debut today?
    Striker:Well who knows .. Maybe we have Santino's grilfriend back ?.
    Layla hits a neckbreaker to Aksana.
    Kaitlyn: Number 3 is coming!
    Striker : 3..2..1 Alicia Fox! Alicia fox comes in and helps Layla , who's is trying to eliminate Aksana by throwing her over the top rope.
    Matthews: And Aksana manages herself to stay in the match!
    Striker: Yeah , that was really close!
    Aksana is now sitting in a corner while Layla and Alicia are the ones who are fighting.
    3..2..1 Natalya comes running to the ring.

    Matthews : Natalya .. What an impressive diva , trained by the WWE hall of fame Bret "The hitman" Hart , she's one of the most skilled divas in the roster.
    Kaitlyn: No doubt about it . She always entertains the crowd.
    Alicia Fox and Layla keep trying to eliminate each other while Natalya has focus on eliminating Aksana .
    Striker: It's time for another Diva !
    3..2..1 Naomi shows up and walks to the ring.
    Striker:Naomi! I love this girl! Really talented diva who reached the final of nxt season 3 ..
    Matthews: Naomi was eliminated by Kaitlyn ! Wait! Wait! Aksana! She's gonna be the first eliminated ! She has touch the ground with her foot !
    Aksana is eliminated by Natalya however , any referee notices that she has actually touch the ground and she comes back to the ring . Natalya starts complaining about it and telling it to the referee when Aksana eliminates her from the back .
    Striker : Oh no come on! How in the blue hell? She was eliminated ! By Natalya ! And now is the other way round!.
    Kaitlyn:That wasn't fair at all.
    Striker:Time for more Divas action!
    3...2...1 The music hits and the other funkadactyl runs into the ring.
    Kaitlyn : Cameron! He used to teach me how to dance ! Haha
    Striker:Layla and Aksana still in the match ..
    Matthews:Yeah , we are about to reach the ten minutes of this amazing divas royal rumble match.
    Alicia Fox is eliminated by Cameron and Naomi.
    Matthews: That was teamwork ! They put a great effort and eliminated one of the toughest girl to eliminate. Wait what?!
    Cameron attacks Naomi from the back and eliminates her , and starts laughing at her .
    Striker: How?! What did just happen?And why?!
    Layla suddenly eliminates Cameron. Naomi starts asking Cameron why did she eliminated her . Cameron slaps her and runs to the backstage.
    Matthews:Wow after this shocking moment , only Layla and Aksana are left in the match.
    3...2..1 Primo's theme song hits and Rosa comes out dancing.
    Striker: From Puerto Rico .. Rossaaaa !
    Matthews:What a body ! What a way of moving it! I love her!
    Kaitlyn: Dude , you need a girlfriend ..
    Striker:(laughing)so true .Watch out! Watch out!
    Matthews:Aksana and Rosa trying to eliminate Layla .. But they cannot ...Layla stays in the match.
    Striker: Impressive move by rosa with that flying kick to Aksana's face.We have two entrances left!
    3...2...1 Tamina's theme song hits and she come running to the ring . Hits Rosa with a tackle and Aksana with a backbreaker.
    Matthews: Tamina is such as a powerful diva ! What do you think about her Kaitlyn?
    Kaitlyn:Such as an impressive diva..
    Matthews:All divas have already shown up who's gonna debut tonight?Will she earn a title shot?
    Kaitlyn:Can't wait to see who's her!
    Matthews:Wow! Tamina connects a Frog Splash ! That gotta hurt! Poor Rosa!
    Striker:Tamina is completely dominating right now! Look ! She's gonna eliminate Aksana !
    Aksana is eliminated by Tamina Snuka.
    Matthews : Layla and Tamina are now in the middle while Rosa is recovering from that move by Tamina.. As we reach the final countdown.. We are gonna know who's the last participant of this match!
    Striker:Can't wait!
    Matthews:5..4..3..2..1 What the hell?!
    Striker: Are you kidding me!!
    Kaitlyn: Cannot believe this....Oh no..
    Matthews: (shouting) My God Beth is back! Beth Phoenix is back! What a surprise!
    Beth runs to the ring and body slams Layla and Tamina .
    Kaitlyn:Wow , just Wow.
    Striker: And know Beth tosses Rosa out of the ring !
    Matthews:The final three ! The final three! Layla,Beth and Tamina.
    The crowd starts cheering Layla.Kaitlyn stands up.
    The three of them look at Kaitlyn .

    Matthews:What a great moment !
    Suddenly , Tamina turns back and starts hitting Layla.Layla tries to cover herself from all those punches and kicks from Tamina.
    Matthews: Be careful Layla! You are getting closer to the ropes !
    Half of Layla's body is already over the ropes and Tamina keeps trying to eliminate her. She turns back and asks Beth for help , who is just watching .
    Layla eliminates Tamina with an hurricana due to Tamina's distraction .

    Striker:What and smart move ! Oh no!
    Beth pushes Layla out of the ring and wins the match .
    Matthews:I guess Beth was more intelligent , therefore ...she won! What a great match! And what a wrestler ! Beth Phoenix just won a shot !
    Kaitlyn raises the title as Beth points at it .
    Matthews: Well that's all ! We got Beth returning to the WWE and winning the match ! It's time for the RR PPV ! Thank you all !
    Striker:Thank you !

    Winner and first contender to the Divas Championship :Beth Phoenix
    Length of the match : 17' 25''

     
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  4. Most intresting divas' match ever, lol.
     
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  5. Not sure if it was because of the lack of color, spaces or the mix between commentary telling the match and the match playing out regularly but I honestly had trouble following several parts of this. Or it could just be me.

    Anyway, outside of that, I don't love that Natalya was first eliminated (though I could've read that wrong) but it's nothing big since of the way it happened. Do like the result though, Beth is awesome.
     


  6. Fixed

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    Thanks , WHC match coming tomorrow
     
  7. Opening
    Show Spoiler


    The crowd goes crazy as there's the pyro introduction. The camera focus on the main entrance where there's the WWE logo .

    Cole: Hello everyone ! Welcome to the first PPV of 2013 , welcome to.. Royal Rumble ! Here with me ... The hall of fame Jerry"The King"Lawler and JBL.

    Lawler:I'm so excited about tonight ! Lets see what happens!

    JBL:We are gonna have great matches tonight!

    Cole:First of all , lets see what happened in the preshow..

    -------Preshow recap---------

    JBL:Such as an amazing match ! And ..Beth came back!


    Lawler:Great to see her back !

    Cole:As we just saw , Beth won the royal rumble earning a shot to the divas title.
    Time's up ! Lets start!


    World Heavyweight Championship Match
    Show Spoiler

    -------------WHC Promo---------------


    Lillian Garcia: The following contest is for the World Heavyweight championship!.Is a last man standing match!.

    (Big show's theme:Heeey is the big show!!) The crowd boos him as he walks slowly to the ring , shouting -Do not boo me you stupid crowd-to the public .

    Cole:That's not a nice way to keep calm a giant.

    JBL:Don't mess up with the giant !

    Big show asks for a mic.

    Big show:Here your new WHC the big show! I'm gonna knock out him (looking at his hand) , till he cannot stand up again in his enti....

    Ricardo Rodriguez shows up with a microphone , gets a huge ovation from the crowd for interrupting the Big Show

    Ricardo Rodriguez : Desde Méjico , vuestro campeón de pesos pesados,la esencia de la WWE , la leyenda viviente , el gran ALBERTOOOO DEEELL RIOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!

    A car driven by Alberto appears from the backstage


    JBL:Wow ! What an amazing car ! I love this dude! A Mercedes SLS AMG!!
    What an awesome car and what a fantastic wrestler! Hope he knows how to beat the giant!

    Lawler:It's gonna be a tough match for Alberto ! Gonna be really physical ! And no DQ!

    Cole:Everything it's allowed!Chairs!Tables!Ladders!
    Everything!

    Alberto del rio hugs Ricardo out and walks slowly to the ring.He gives his scarf to a young fan.Big Show goes out of the ring as Alberto steps in.Then Big Show starts talking again.

    Big show:You should be afraid of me Berto,I've brought this.


    Big show shows the giant chair ,the one he beat Sheamus with.

    Cole:My god !He has brought that chair!

    JBL:An awesome weapon !

    Alberto and Ricardo look surprised.The big show goes back to the ring.Alberto rises the belt and asks Ricardo to leave.
    The referee rings the bell and the match starts , Show rises the chair and Alberto del rio runs out of the ring .


    JBL:You don't wanna be in the same ring that a giant with a giant chair!

    Alberto grabs another chair and gets in the ring. Big show tries to hit him with the giant chair,Alberto moves to the right and hits Show's leg with the chair,Show drops the giant chair because of the hit.

    Cole:Nice counter by Alberto,who's now in control!

    Lawler:Everything is legal!

    Alberto hits Show's back with the chair.
    Show lays into his knees.Alberto hits another three times.Big show cannot stand more the pain and falls .


    Alberto: The count !

    The referee starts counting . 1.....2.....3
    Big show cannot stand up ...4...5 but he's finally able to stand up.
    Alberto grabs the giant chair , and stares at the crowd .Everyone starts shouting SI! SI! SI! SI!.


    JBL:What a crowd ! What an atmosphere! Go for it Berto!

    Lawler:Go for it !

    Alberto rises the chair , when suddenly Big show starts begging , asking Alberto not to hit him.Alberto doubts about it when Show suddenly hits a K.O punch to the chair ,which hits Alberto.

    JBL:Wow.Smart move by Show.

    Alberto has some blood coming out of his nose.

    Lawler:Holy shit! Alberto is bleeding. What a freaking punch!

    Big show starts laughing at him.Alberto is just K.O on the ring.He is laying in the ring like if he has been hit by an elephant.

    Big Show:U stupid referee start the count ! Don't waste my time!

    The referee starts the count.1....2....3....4...


    JBL:He's gonna win this thing!

    ...5...6 Alberto is on his knees
    ....7....8 Ricardo suddenly steps in the ring and helps Alberto to stand up.The crowd cheers both of them.


    Lawler:That's called partnership!.

    Big show grabs Ricardo and hits him with a K.O punch.

    JBL: Oh God !

    Cole:Big Show hits way harder than a professional boxer , he has destroyed Ricardo's jaw for sure.

    Alberto rolls off the ring and brings Ricardo with him .The big show keeps laughing at both of them.Alberto bring a bat from under the ring , Big show goes out off the ring and Alberto tries to hit him , however , Big show stops the bat from hitting him,kicks Alberto's stomach and throws the bat away . Alberto starts kicking Show's legs , trying to bring him down .

    JBL:That's the only way !

    Show pushs him to the stairs but Alberto manages himself to skip the stairs.Show iwas going to hit a spear to Alberto but he moves to the left and Show goes trough the barricade.

    Cole:Mother of god!Show just went trough the barricade !

    JBL:Is this enough for Alberto ?

    The referee starts the counting but he only reaches 8 . Big show stands up .
    Alberto starts talking with Ricardo , who has already recovered from the K.O punch.
    Alberto turns back , and hits a flying kick to show's head .


    JBL:He's owningthe giant !

    Ricardo starts walking slowly to the backstage.
    Alberto brings Show to the ramp for going to the backstage and start punching each other .

    Lawler:The match is getting way more physical than it should.This is not good for Alberto.

    Show pushes Alberto to the barricade .Alberto stands up and Show spears him.

    JBL:What a fantastic move!

    Ricardo has opened the car's door and started to look for something .
    The Big show is now working Alberto's back.Then he holds him with the bear's hug.


    Cole: Alberto is running out of air!

    Show brings Alberto next to the huge WWE's logo, and he body slams him to the logo.

    Lawler:Such as an amazing match! Who's gonna win?

    JBL:Go Alberto !

    The referee asks Alberto if he can continue in the match . Meanwhile , big show runs to the announce table and gets a mic . He walks back where Alberto is.He starts making fun of Alberto:

    Hey amigo ! What's up dude ? Wanna have a burrito?I invite you!What so you say?

    Show situates the mic closed to Alberto's mouth .
    Alberto with his last breath says
    :

    Hey Amigo ! You should be more careful!

    Big show stands up and looks around , Then he suddenly realise that Ricardo is driving Alberto's car , Show screams -No- and hits the referee with a K.O punch , just before Ricardo runs over him.
    The crowd goes crazy


    JBL:Holy shit ! Holy shit!

    Cole:Mother of God! Did-did-did Ricardo just ran over the Big show?

    Lawler:That was freaking crazy!

    The referee is k.o and he cannot stand up .
    Ricardo helps Alberto to stand up. Alberto thanks Ricardo. Then he looks at the referee and realises that he's not gonna be able to start the count so he start talking with Ricardo in Spanish .Big show cannot move at all.


    JBL:Alberto has realised that he's not gonna be able to win the match this way ! He needs to think about something that doesnt allow big show to stand up.

    The camera focus on the mexicans.

    Ricardo:Maybe with a barricade , or chairs ...

    Alberto:No,No,No , he's a giant.... We need something bigger

    Ricardo:Then the stairs ! Or tables! No se....

    Alberto:Wait my friend what if...(he starts speaking Spanish)

    Ricardo looks surprised about what Alberto just said to him . Both of them run to the car and open the boot.


    JBL:Looks like if they are looking for something! The ultimate weapon!

    Lawler:Go Alberto! Looks like if he has a great idea!

    Cole:He looks really confident !

    The crowd is chanting SI!SI!SI! As both ,mexicans keep looking into the boot.

    Then , Alberto takes an object from the boot.


    Lawler:What the hell is that?!?!?

    Alberto shows it to the crowd .

    JBL:Wait what?!? A jack ?! Oh no he's not gonnna do that...No way!

    Show keeps unconscious but the referee starts moving his legs and arms .
    Ricardo starts using the jack ,elevating the front part of the car. Alberto stares at Big show .
    When Ricardo has already elevated enough the car he shouts -ya está-to Alberto , then he looks at Show for the last time and pushes him under the car .


    JBL:No fucking way! He's gonna kill him!

    Lawler:Keep it PG! What the hell!

    Cole : That's amazing,smart,awesome,intelligent .....

    Once the Big show is under the car,Ricardo takes off the jack so the whole weight of the car goes to Big show whostarts screaming-I quit! I freaking quit!- ,the referee stands up and starts counting .
    Alberto grabs the mic and starts counting in Spanish. The Big show keeps screaming as he cannot move.
    All the crowd is counting at the same time as Alberto :
    UNO .....
    DOS.....
    TRES.....


    JBL: What the hell! He's gonna do it ! He's gonna retain the title !

    JBL, Lawler and Cole join the Crowd , Ricardo and Alberto.
    CUATRO....
    CINCO.....
    SEIS.....
    SIETE....
    OCHO...
    NUEVE...
    DIEZ!!!!!!!!!
    The ring bells and Alberto and Ricardo hug out.The referee asks members from the staff to move the car as Show doesn't stop screaming .
    Alberto runs to the ring and takes the belt from Lillian Garcia , then he goes to the turnbuckle and rises it . The whole crowd cheers him and SI!SI!SI! Are all over the arena .


    Cole:What an amazing match! Fantastic!

    JBL:Woooww! Alberto is a genius !

    Lawler:What a way I start a PPV!

    --------Highlights of the match-----
    The camera focus on the three commentators .

    Cole:Up next ,the Tag team Championship match.

    The camera focus briefly on Alberto and Ricardo and the in Big show who is being helped by the medical staff .
    ------------Commercial Break-----------
    Winner : ADR Lenght:23 minute 34 seconds
     
  8. ROYAL RUMBLE 2013
    Opening
    Show Spoiler


    The crowd goes crazy as there's the pyro introduction. The camera focus on the main entrance where there's the WWE logo .

    Cole: Hello everyone ! Welcome to the first PPV of 2013 , welcome to.. Royal Rumble ! Here with me ... The hall of fame Jerry"The King"Lawler and JBL.

    Lawler:I'm so excited about tonight ! Lets see what happens!

    JBL:We are gonna have great matches tonight!

    Cole:First of all , lets see what happened in the preshow..

    -------Preshow recap---------

    JBL:Such as an amazing match ! And ..Beth came back!


    Lawler:Great to see her back !

    Cole:As we just saw , Beth won the royal rumble earning a shot to the divas title.
    Time's up ! Lets start!


    World Heavyweight Championship Match
    Show Spoiler

    -------------WHC Promo---------------


    Lillian Garcia: The following contest is for the World Heavyweight championship!.Is a last man standing match!.

    (Big show's theme:Heeey is the big show!!) The crowd boos him as he walks slowly to the ring , shouting -Do not boo me you stupid crowd-to the public .

    Cole:That's not a nice way to keep calm a giant.

    JBL:Don't mess up with the giant !

    Big show asks for a mic.

    Big show:Here your new WHC the big show! I'm gonna knock out him (looking at his hand) , till he cannot stand up again in his enti....

    Ricardo Rodriguez shows up with a microphone , gets a huge ovation from the crowd for interrupting the Big Show

    Ricardo Rodriguez : Desde Méjico , vuestro campeón de pesos pesados,la esencia de la WWE , la leyenda viviente , el gran ALBERTOOOO DEEELL RIOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!

    A car driven by Alberto appears from the backstage


    JBL:Wow ! What an amazing car ! I love this dude! A Mercedes SLS AMG!!
    What an awesome car and what a fantastic wrestler! Hope he knows how to beat the giant!

    Lawler:It's gonna be a tough match for Alberto ! Gonna be really physical ! And no DQ!

    Cole:Everything it's allowed!Chairs!Tables!Ladders!
    Everything!

    Alberto del rio hugs Ricardo out and walks slowly to the ring.He gives his scarf to a young fan.Big Show goes out of the ring as Alberto steps in.Then Big Show starts talking again.

    Big show:You should be afraid of me Berto,I've brought this.


    Big show shows the giant chair ,the one he beat Sheamus with.

    Cole:My god !He has brought that chair!

    JBL:An awesome weapon !

    Alberto and Ricardo look surprised.The big show goes back to the ring.Alberto rises the belt and asks Ricardo to leave.
    The referee rings the bell and the match starts , Show rises the chair and Alberto del rio runs out of the ring .


    JBL:You don't wanna be in the same ring that a giant with a giant chair!

    Alberto grabs another chair and gets in the ring. Big show tries to hit him with the giant chair,Alberto moves to the right and hits Show's leg with the chair,Show drops the giant chair because of the hit.

    Cole:Nice counter by Alberto,who's now in control!

    Lawler:Everything is legal!

    Alberto hits Show's back with the chair.
    Show lays into his knees.Alberto hits another three times.Big show cannot stand more the pain and falls .


    Alberto: The count !

    The referee starts counting . 1.....2.....3
    Big show cannot stand up ...4...5 but he's finally able to stand up.
    Alberto grabs the giant chair , and stares at the crowd .Everyone starts shouting SI! SI! SI! SI!.


    JBL:What a crowd ! What an atmosphere! Go for it Berto!

    Lawler:Go for it !

    Alberto rises the chair , when suddenly Big show starts begging , asking Alberto not to hit him.Alberto doubts about it when Show suddenly hits a K.O punch to the chair ,which hits Alberto.

    JBL:Wow.Smart move by Show.

    Alberto has some blood coming out of his nose.

    Lawler:Holy shit! Alberto is bleeding. What a freaking punch!

    Big show starts laughing at him.Alberto is just K.O on the ring.He is laying in the ring like if he has been hit by an elephant.

    Big Show:U stupid referee start the count ! Don't waste my time!

    The referee starts the count.1....2....3....4...


    JBL:He's gonna win this thing!

    ...5...6 Alberto is on his knees
    ....7....8 Ricardo suddenly steps in the ring and helps Alberto to stand up.The crowd cheers both of them.


    Lawler:That's called partnership!.

    Big show grabs Ricardo and hits him with a K.O punch.

    JBL: Oh God !

    Cole:Big Show hits way harder than a professional boxer , he has destroyed Ricardo's jaw for sure.

    Alberto rolls off the ring and brings Ricardo with him .The big show keeps laughing at both of them.Alberto bring a bat from under the ring , Big show goes out off the ring and Alberto tries to hit him , however , Big show stops the bat from hitting him,kicks Alberto's stomach and throws the bat away . Alberto starts kicking Show's legs , trying to bring him down .

    JBL:That's the only way !

    Show pushs him to the stairs but Alberto manages himself to skip the stairs.Show iwas going to hit a spear to Alberto but he moves to the left and Show goes trough the barricade.

    Cole:Mother of god!Show just went trough the barricade !

    JBL:Is this enough for Alberto ?

    The referee starts the counting but he only reaches 8 . Big show stands up .
    Alberto starts talking with Ricardo , who has already recovered from the K.O punch.
    Alberto turns back , and hits a flying kick to show's head .


    JBL:He's owningthe giant !

    Ricardo starts walking slowly to the backstage.
    Alberto brings Show to the ramp for going to the backstage and start punching each other .

    Lawler:The match is getting way more physical than it should.This is not good for Alberto.

    Show pushes Alberto to the barricade .Alberto stands up and Show spears him.

    JBL:What a fantastic move!

    Ricardo has opened the car's door and started to look for something .
    The Big show is now working Alberto's back.Then he holds him with the bear's hug.


    Cole: Alberto is running out of air!

    Show brings Alberto next to the huge WWE's logo, and he body slams him to the logo.

    Lawler:Such as an amazing match! Who's gonna win?

    JBL:Go Alberto !

    The referee asks Alberto if he can continue in the match . Meanwhile , big show runs to the announce table and gets a mic . He walks back where Alberto is.He starts making fun of Alberto:

    Hey amigo ! What's up dude ? Wanna have a burrito?I invite you!What so you say?

    Show situates the mic closed to Alberto's mouth .
    Alberto with his last breath says
    :

    Hey Amigo ! You should be more careful!

    Big show stands up and looks around , Then he suddenly realise that Ricardo is driving Alberto's car , Show screams -No- and hits the referee with a K.O punch , just before Ricardo runs over him.
    The crowd goes crazy


    JBL:Holy shit ! Holy shit!

    Cole:Mother of God! Did-did-did Ricardo just ran over the Big show?

    Lawler:That was freaking crazy!

    The referee is k.o and he cannot stand up .
    Ricardo helps Alberto to stand up. Alberto thanks Ricardo. Then he looks at the referee and realises that he's not gonna be able to start the count so he start talking with Ricardo in Spanish .Big show cannot move at all.


    JBL:Alberto has realised that he's not gonna be able to win the match this way ! He needs to think about something that doesnt allow big show to stand up.

    The camera focus on the mexicans.

    Ricardo:Maybe with a barricade , or chairs ...

    Alberto:No,No,No , he's a giant.... We need something bigger

    Ricardo:Then the stairs ! Or tables! No se....

    Alberto:Wait my friend what if...(he starts speaking Spanish)

    Ricardo looks surprised about what Alberto just said to him . Both of them run to the car and open the boot.


    JBL:Looks like if they are looking for something! The ultimate weapon!

    Lawler:Go Alberto! Looks like if he has a great idea!

    Cole:He looks really confident !

    The crowd is chanting SI!SI!SI! As both ,mexicans keep looking into the boot.

    Then , Alberto takes an object from the boot.


    Lawler:What the hell is that?!?!?

    Alberto shows it to the crowd .

    JBL:Wait what?!? A jack ?! Oh no he's not gonnna do that...No way!

    Show keeps unconscious but the referee starts moving his legs and arms .
    Ricardo starts using the jack ,elevating the front part of the car. Alberto stares at Big show .
    When Ricardo has already elevated enough the car he shouts -ya está-to Alberto , then he looks at Show for the last time and pushes him under the car .


    JBL:No fucking way! He's gonna kill him!

    Lawler:Keep it PG! What the hell!

    Cole : That's amazing,smart,awesome,intelligent .....

    Once the Big show is under the car,Ricardo takes off the jack so the whole weight of the car goes to Big show whostarts screaming-I quit! I freaking quit!- ,the referee stands up and starts counting .
    Alberto grabs the mic and starts counting in Spanish. The Big show keeps screaming as he cannot move.
    All the crowd is counting at the same time as Alberto :
    UNO .....
    DOS.....
    TRES.....


    JBL: What the hell! He's gonna do it ! He's gonna retain the title !

    JBL, Lawler and Cole join the Crowd , Ricardo and Alberto.
    CUATRO....
    CINCO.....
    SEIS.....
    SIETE....
    OCHO...
    NUEVE...
    DIEZ!!!!!!!!!
    The ring bells and Alberto and Ricardo hug out.The referee asks members from the staff to move the car as Show doesn't stop screaming .
    Alberto runs to the ring and takes the belt from Lillian Garcia , then he goes to the turnbuckle and rises it . The whole crowd cheers him and SI!SI!SI! Are all over the arena .


    Cole:What an amazing match! Fantastic!

    JBL:Woooww! Alberto is a genius !

    Lawler:What a way I start a PPV!

    --------Highlights of the match-----
    The camera focus on the three commentators .

    Cole:Up next ,the Tag team Championship match.

    The camera focus briefly on Alberto and Ricardo and the in Big show who is being helped by the medical staff .
    ------------Commercial Break-----------
    Winner : ADR Lenght:23 minute 34 seconds
     
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  9. Yeah, the color really helped me out follow this. Anyway, the WHC match was good. There were some grammar issues, pretty much every one was just an issue of spacing. As for the beef of it, I had a few minor problems. Like Show's begging actually working, or Ricardo having to get Del Rio up that early in the match (or at all but meh). I do really like the finish however, much better than the one that actually happened at The Rumble.

    Also, I found the instance where Lawler told JBL to keep it PG after JBL said "fucking" hilarious since earlier in the match Lawler exclaimed "Holy Shit!"
     
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  10. Thanks I will fix the grammar errors and will keep writing the PPV .
    Like your opinion.Helps me to improve :dawg:
     
  11. Your matches are better than books, I swear :happy:
     
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  12.  
  13. You bringing this back?
     
  14. I would like to yes
     
  15. I can help if you want
     
  16. Sure, that would be great. I would start writing whenever the SD Spoilers are up. Then, the first show would be next week's RAW.
     
  17. Awesome! Just tell me what you need help with, My previous work can be found in my BTB :)
     
  18. I'm gonna write a BTB. If you both want, you can help me.